New Member-Silversurf

Character Name: Silversurf
How You Heard About The RP Society: I saw your guildstone
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? I haven't been playing Mabinogi a lot because a friend, bioshocker, recommanded it to me. I have been playing other games for years.
Is English Your First Language? Its my second, my first language is Chinese.
A Short Biography Of Your Character: I started this character on Saturday last week. Its pretty newb with about 13k with the beginner spirit sword, raven gladius, and a 2h sword. Its currently lvl13 and trying to do the G-1 quest. I did the imps dream land event and its pretty easy.
What type of character do you play? A warrior.
What is your Mabinogi schedule?Hoping to hit lvl30 in 1 week and lvl up consistanly.

Not exactly a character bio....

Try again, this time writing about your character's story and/or personality

Okay. My character is a friend of bioshocker. He's good at all sorts of skills and is always reliable. Despite the fact ioshocker is stronger, I know I will beat him one day. He will never attack another character unless provoked, but he hates bots. He is friendly and is a team player. People like him.

Still not what we are looking for.....

To get in, you should stop thinking of it in terms of characters.

Who is Silversurf as a person?
What events in his past define his personality?

Avoid referring to game-terms such as bots,(Along with any other non-roleplayer, we pretend they don't exist while In Character) and try again.

Remember, third time's the charm

Personally, I am a bit of a freeloader, who likes to get things for free. I am very dependable in a fight and is always a good person to have around. In my childhood, I was always bullied by other people and resolved to beat them one day. I have a big brother whos smarter and richer than me, but he has no friends. I will never stop trying to be the best me!

Closer, but......
Perhaps you should read the rules for registration

I am a really funny person with a lot of abilities and skills. I live to have fun and help my guild buddies. I come from the previous unknown land called the NEW WORLD. In the NEW WORLD, I am a explorer that journeyed to this land. I came to Mabinogi on a airplane that crashed into a forest and exploded. I am a reliale person and will do the best I can. My past is pretty hazy and I only remember parts of it due to brain damage.

Getting closer, although a few points shall be made.

The world of Mabinogi is called Erinn
There is no advanced technology within Erinn
Unless stated otherwise, all members have arrived from another world, usually due to the death or incapacitation of their original bodies.
Finally, the transition tends to make everyone's past a bit hazy

Perhaps your registration could read something like this:

Born to a place simply called the 'New World,' i was an avid explorer....(insert middle here)......the plane crashed, and when I awoke, I found myself in the presence of a white-haired lady, who led me to the world of Erinn

Born in a place called the New World, I loved to explore. Everyone liked me because I am a really funny person with a lot of abilities and skills. I live to have fun and help my guild buddies. One day, as I was setting off on another one of my great journeys, I was suddenly transported to a previously unknown place. A young lady appeared and informed me that I was now in Erinn, what they call this place. I decided to settle here and explorer this land.

Well, I suppose i should leave the vote up to the other members now....

I see much work ahead, since a fair amount of effort will be required from two parties: Us mentors, and the prospective player.